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Plot help

Journal Entry: Tue Mar 27, 2012, 11:22 AM
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AkiliRose Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm, personally, I like the first idea better. The slave thing is a bit overdone- though it really never gets old xD
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Jesuka Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Yeah thanks, I've actually came up with a great idea for my story now. DemonX is now the first part of a main story of 4 parts with three different protagonists. :3 I'm so excited about it.
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AkiliRose Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Good luck! xD :iconwhooplz:
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:iconthe-laziest-artist:
This journal was a while ago but if you're still looking for opinions then the first one is much more interesting to me. Its a nice twist on a classic element. The second one is quite bland and predictable by comparison in my opinion.
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Jesuka May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Wow! Thanks, it's a big help when I have the opinions of others. I like your point, and I think that's where I might lead the story to. :meow: thank-you very much.

P.S. Do you have any ideas for the Name of the main girl in the story, She's human, so it has to be quite ordinary but it has to stand out a little, if you get what I mean. The first part of the story is set in England normal time, where she lives. If you have any ideas that would be great! I've been thinking for about a year now and can't come up with anything...Thanks again.
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:iconthe-laziest-artist:
To be honest i suck with names, they are usually the last thing a concentrate on when thinking of a story. So sorry but i cant give you any good ideas there. Frankly i think the name is less important, just give her something simple to work with and start building your story, as the story progresses either whatever name you give her will grow on you, or you will realize in the process what the name should be.

So the important thing i think to do is not stress to much on the name and just make the start the story. Name her Sarah or something. Or do what i do, Google English female names :P
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Jesuka May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Heehee lol. Thanks a lot, your wisdom knows no bounds. :3
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